Surprise! :) I have rather skirted the edges of House fandom the past year, partly due to RL and partly because I'm also into SGA. But this summer I have a window to be a bit more active, so I'm enjoying reading a bit more.
I understand the nervous-writer thing completely! But you shouldn't be--you have a natural, readable style. I don't often write in the 'explain-y' way you did here, and I thought you pulled it off beautifully.
(And don't worry about that last bit--just thought it might have escaped notice, as these things do. If you'd rather I didn't nitpick [which I do sometimes, but only because I would want someone to do it to me!], I can refrain...)
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I understand the nervous-writer thing completely! But you shouldn't be--you have a natural, readable style. I don't often write in the 'explain-y' way you did here, and I thought you pulled it off beautifully.
(And don't worry about that last bit--just thought it might have escaped notice, as these things do. If you'd rather I didn't nitpick [which I do sometimes, but only because I would want someone to do it to me!], I can refrain...)