well then, thankyou :D I've got the one in this comm, here (http://community.livejournal.com/sick_wilson/312274.html), it would be great if you could have a read over and do the beta-ing thing on that (comments on improvements, any glaring or not-so-glaring error, problems with characterisation? I don't think there's much medically wrong with the smoke inhalation as I made it minor, so there wasn't any *real* need for medical attention..) If that works well for you, I have a work-in-progress that I would love for someone to read over too, for this comm? I have doubts about it, but can discuss in more detail by email (which is better than PM - see below) if you are happy to.

Thankyou :) :) :)

(also, I had one new 'message' in my inbox which I ignored as I also had 700+ updates, but in clearing out the junk I inadvertently deleted the actual message too... no idea who/what it was, so if that was from you - apologies, it'll need to be done again!)