http://barefootpuddles.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] barefootpuddles.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sick_wilson 2011-03-20 10:46 pm (UTC)

A wonderfully realistic after scene.

Eventually, he drifted off, with his hand curled tight like it was trying to hold onto something.

And a lovely wrap up line that speaks volumes.

Very nicely done!

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