ext_19772 ([identity profile] deelaundry.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sick_wilson 2011-07-06 03:54 am (UTC)

Powerful! Faylynn is awful. Ugh. I liked how you kept Wendy realistic; clearly disapproving but not going off on a tirade about how awful Faylynn is. Made the interplay seem more true-to-life, and thus gave it a stronger impact to the reader.

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