ext_19772 (
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2011-07-06 03:54 am (UTC)
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Powerful! Faylynn is
awful
. Ugh. I liked how you kept Wendy realistic; clearly disapproving but not going off on a tirade about how awful Faylynn is. Made the interplay seem more true-to-life, and thus gave it a stronger impact to the reader.
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