Full circle, House thinks, but doesn't flinch as he slides the probe home. I sort of gaped at that sentence for nearly a minute. It was so clever to tie that in.
Having House's thoughts really had an impact on the story. I'm glad you added them. It recaps the events in a much more emotional way than if you had simply told us what happened.
I didn't know if you'd be you when you woke up. If you woke up. Me either. Putting aside that he could have suffered brain damage, how could he go through all that and not be changed? House has certainly been changed. I've really enjoyed this story and part of me hopes there will be a follow up by either you or someone with your blessing.
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I sort of gaped at that sentence for nearly a minute. It was so clever to tie that in.
Having House's thoughts really had an impact on the story. I'm glad you added them. It recaps the events in a much more emotional way than if you had simply told us what happened.
I didn't know if you'd be you when you woke up. If you woke up.
Me either. Putting aside that he could have suffered brain damage, how could he go through all that and not be changed? House has certainly been changed. I've really enjoyed this story and part of me hopes there will be a follow up by either you or someone with your blessing.