http://jblankbluth.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jblankbluth.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sick_wilson 2007-07-19 03:09 am (UTC)

Anyway, an actual review and not just a cryptic hint of plan: It's good, but I'd offer you the same advice as last time--thicker paragraphs, etc.
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