Beta request...

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 Hi guys!
I'm new here, (although I have lurked a little while) and I like the community so much I decided to take the plunge and try my hand at a short little fic. I have never written a fic before, so I was hoping to crawl over and beg for a beta to see if it's worth posting. :)
Anyway, it's really short...about 3 pages in MS Word. Would somebody mind taking a look at it?

If so, please email me at housemdfan@gmail.com and I'll send you the MS Word file.

Thanks a lot for any help for a newbie...