Beta? Pretty please with a cherry lollipop on top?

[barefootpuddles.livejournal.com]

Is anyone up to doing a quick beta read of a ficlet?

The piece is about 900 words, and I am pretty solid in spelling and grammar. Mostly what I need is someone to see if the voice sounds like House. I wrote it in the first person (House's POV) - something completely new for me  - and I need feedback. Also, the ideas House has about Wilson need to be checked for continuity in relationship to the show (I think I didn't screw anything up in that way, but a second pair of eyes is always good). My normal beta takes two to three weeks or more, and I really want to put this up for Camp Sick!Wilson.

If it wets anyone's whistle, a summary of the piece is that House is deconstructing - and mocking - the myths that exist concerning his friendship with Wilson. The sickness portion is in reference to mental illness.

I promise it would be an easy beta, that I take concrit very well, and that I offer virtual cookies and other assorted gifts. Anyone, anyone?

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[cresty-on-ry.livejournal.com]

::raises hand::

I'll do it, unless you have someone else already. Needless to say, with the new job I just started, I have quite a lot of down time and could easily get it back to you sometime on Thursday (granted you're US stateside). :)